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Mary (Guest), December 28th, 2011, 10:33 pm
unsurprising It would be a little too simple to take him down that quickly.
Steve (Guest), February 2nd, 2012, 9:10 pm
Grammar I like it. But I'm noticing some typos these last few pages. You've got some reversed words. "The same person who hired to me bring in you." Should be "bring you in." "Best back-up I could find where these clowns" should be "were these clowns". I hate to be a stickler, but stuff like that is distracting to your reader. You've got some quality stuff here so I'd like to see you not soil it with stupid grammar mistakes.
RDPulfer, February 2nd, 2012, 9:43 pm
Arghh Thanks for pointing that out, Steve! I check over for glaring mistakes every week, but it looks like the little things are still escaping me from time to time! I need to keep a closer look!
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